chandelier at Versailles

A secret kiss revisited
Sweeter now than before
There will be an ever after
Love’s hope finally restored


42 thoughts on “Reunion

  1. Again your tremendous talent for writing and poetry shines through. I really love this, I think everyone has been there at some time or other in their lives. Bittersweet memories of love lost. I’m copying this into my ‘Beautiful Words’ journal. Thank you.

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    • I always have to chop down the things I write. Believe it for not this was 12 lines initially. Much better trimmed down I think. I have a constant struggle against wordiness. Limiting myself to a few lines is an exercise in choosing words more wisely. A very good exercise. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Trimming is good. Always. Hack and hack.
    You could actually only keep the last verse:
    “Love’s hope forever restored”… ๐Ÿ™‚ (Oh. I mean finally)
    Tell me the truth Victoire, you do have a staff of five writers working for you full time right?

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